Feedback on Rough Cut

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 5/10

 

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• A range of shots
• Ending was good

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• No swinging in the hanging scene (A little unrealistic)

• Hanging Scene

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• Text is too quick
• Hanging scene, the foot is not on the ladder when It is kicked

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 8/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• I liked the setting and the narrative
• Good camera angles

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• When the ladder in the hanging scene is kicked away your other foot hardly moves as if you were not standing on it
• Used "Hush Little Baby" twice near the end

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 7/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• Has a flowing narrative
• A nice speed to it
• A variety of angles

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• Different types of cuts
• Fade into inter-titles is needed

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 7/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• Good shots from different angles

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• Flow during the middle

 

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 7/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• Liked scene of hanging
• Liked the ending
• Like the music “I’m Back”

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• First half needs more
• Story-line needs to be more clear
• Bit slow

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 6/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• The hanging scene
• The use of music at the end
• The mirror scene

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• I thought there was too much being shown of the past and the woman’s life before
• The shots could be quicker

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 7/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• Jump scene at the end was good
• Fast paced bit in the middle worked really well
• Hanging bit was really good
• “I’m Back” sounded really effective

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• More close ups
• Beginning was a little confusing

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 6/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• Ending shots
• Montage after suicide
• Creepy music

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• Narrative is confused

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 6/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• End music
• Light flicker works well
• Good jump scare
• I like the mirror part

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• Slightly clearer narrative

 

 

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NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 7/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• Good music at end of hanging scene
• Liked mirror bit
• Flashing lights

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• A bit confusing narrative

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 7/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• The music
• The photograph shots
• The close ups of faces

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• Shots are slightly short and quick at the beginning

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 7/10

 

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• Really well shot (Close up at the end)
• Loved the creepy lullaby
• Lots of quick shots work well especially Alex’s hair

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• A shame about the music
• Some of it could have been shot a bit smoother
• Story-line needs a tiny bit of work

 

 

 

NAME OF TRAILER: LULLABY YOUR SCORE: 7-8/10

WHAT DID YOU LIKE ABOUT THE TRAILER?

• The flickering lights are really good
• Good story-line
• End music works well

WHAT DO YOU THINK COULD BE IMPROVED IN THE TRAILER?

• Hanging scene could have had a bit more pace and emotional reaction